“S” Sing-Sang-Sung

Iโ€™ve sang songs as I have sat by the sea shore

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Iโ€™ve written songs about singing songs

I sang while sitting by the sea shore

I am a song sang while sitting by the sea shore.

I am the sea of which you sang while sitting there singing by the shore

I am the wind of which she sang as she set singing songs by the sea shore

I am the shore that set by the sea since eternity did sing of me

And I sing of the days and the nights when you sat singing songs

About the sea that sang songs about me as I set singing songs

BY THE SEA SHORE

by

Sammie L. Carter

Copyright 07 April 2011

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~ by Sam373'sBlog on April 9, 2011.

20 Responses to ““S” Sing-Sang-Sung”

  1. delightful……

    love music/sweet songs..

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  2. What fun Sam! I read this aloud for the sheer joy of tongue twisting! ๐Ÿ™‚

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  3. welcome..

    such lovely singing words.
    a treat for the weekend.
    ๐Ÿ™‚

    Happy Rally.

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  4. this is really great!

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  5. Lovely playful use of words…delightful.

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  6. I will make my students sing this song about the sea and sigh as symphony pervades the air. Good work!

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  7. Lovely piece. The repetition makes it hypnotic, so to me your song is really a Gregorian chant. Thanks for sharing this one for the rally!

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  8. Brilliant! Ambitious but mastered ๐Ÿ™‚

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  9. why set and setting Sam in the first two lines? They threw me off but I dug the tongue twister quality of it ๐Ÿ™‚

    enjoy the rally!

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  10. I remember a tale that mermaids sing in the sea to lure men in their trap…this poem of yours sounds like about a singing mermaid…but of different melody!

    LOved the sing, sang, sung of it! I could feel the rhythm of your words!

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  11. ๐Ÿ™‚
    It’s kind of hard to read this one aloud…
    Great write

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  12. traveling ahead, Sam? ๐Ÿ™‚ I tht the A-Z was still in K or L ๐Ÿ˜€ well executed, but yeah, little hard off the tongue ๐Ÿ™‚

    Rally Week 41 – My Poetry

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  14. Pretty twisted one! ๐Ÿ™‚ I love singing and your awesome singing poem… ๐Ÿ˜‰

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  15. I’m singing with you ๐Ÿ™‚
    Lovely poem Sam!!
    I’m nominating you for Outstanding Poet of National Poetry Month.

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  17. a real tongue twister Sam… clever usage of words.. The Sea having had many a song sang about her shores.. ๐Ÿ™‚

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