THEY SAID:

HE SAID:

“HEY GIRL,

I SEE THAT TWINKLE IN YOU EYE,

THE TEAR DROP ON YOUR THIGH.

I SEE YOU-

RUNNING BAREFOOT IN THE PARK

WHITE PANTIES IN THE DARK.

I HEAR YOU-

SCREAMING WITH YOUR EYES

AS THE CLOUDS FALL FROM THE SKY.

I FEEL YOU-

TREMBLE TO MY TOUCH,

FULFILLED BUT NOT TOO MUCH.

CLOSE BUT LIKE FOREVER,

TOO FAR, FOR ME TO SAVOR…”.

SHE SAID:

“HEY BOY,

I SAW YOU TINKLE ON THAT TREE-

LIKE THE MARK YOU’LL LEAVE ON ME!

I HEAR YOU

CRYING IN THE DARK,

AS YOU ARGUE WITH YOUR HEART.

I FEEL YOU;

SQUEEZING MY LOVE STARVED HEART.

I DON’T WANT YOU TO LEAVE YOUR MARK.

I’LL RUN FROM YOU IN THE PARK,

WITH WHITE PANTIES ON THE MARK;

YOU’LL LOSE ME IN THE DARK.

YOU SEE…

 

I KNOW YOU, BOY!”

By   Sammie L. Carter

Copyright@10/04/2008, 3:48 am


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~ by Sam373'sBlog on August 24, 2009.

8 Responses to “THEY SAID:”

  1. love the two way thought- nice one sam.. my potluck.. http://fiveloaf.wordpress.com/2010/06/04/metamorphosis/

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  2. I really enjoyed that, and the layout worked so well for your little story!

    Here from Poetry Potluck.

    http://jessicasjapes.wordpress.com/2011/02/21/home/

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  3. Expressive rhymes. I enjoyed it!

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  4. playful and beautiful…
    there are wisdom in your words.
    Cheers,
    Thanks for sharing.

    A++

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  5. yes, really like the two perspectives and what unique perspectives they are!

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  6. good one sam. very well crafted poem.

    trisha
    http://mydomainpvt.wordpress.com/2011/02/20/free-soul-20th-feb-2011/

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    • I miss you. Why have you not been communicating? I thought I had correctly subscribed to your blog (s). I will do so again.

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  7. I dig this, the rhymes, the thoughts cool! 🙂

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